Comments on: Greener Gardens http://poeticimmortal.crimsonmelodies.com/2009/11/03/greener-gardens/ Musings From a Poetic Immortal Wed, 21 Jul 2010 17:58:39 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5.2 hourly 1 By: Tatiana Scavone http://poeticimmortal.crimsonmelodies.com/2009/11/03/greener-gardens/comment-page-1/#comment-66 Tatiana Scavone Fri, 18 Dec 2009 04:50:48 +0000 http://www.crimsonmelodies.com/poet/2009/11/greener-gardens/#comment-66 It is, simply come back to keep quiet. Return to close your eyes and dream And I thank God to think again: The world is not lost. Even successful people working. What can perhaps help humanity, To save the next disaster. And maybe, who knows ... Genetically can donate some of this wisdom For their children. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. Your text is beautiful! It is, simply come back to keep quiet.
Return to close your eyes and dream
And I thank God to think again:
The world is not lost.
Even successful people working.
What can perhaps help humanity,
To save the next disaster.

And maybe, who knows …
Genetically can donate some of this wisdom
For their children.

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful. Your text is beautiful!

]]> By: LunaJune http://poeticimmortal.crimsonmelodies.com/2009/11/03/greener-gardens/comment-page-1/#comment-28 LunaJune Wed, 04 Nov 2009 02:06:50 +0000 http://www.crimsonmelodies.com/poet/2009/11/greener-gardens/#comment-28 You walk through my mind sending waves of thought and feeling shooting through my body you talk to my mind showing me all the wonders of me that I sometimes forget to see you touch my body with tender hands and thrill it with waves of ecstasy all of this, you do to me with your mind, your energy and your voice I wait and dream of our bodies touching for the first time each word of the poem 'Greener Gardens' painted such lovely images in my mind, you took me for a wonderful walk and it pulled this out of my memory. I can't wait to see where your words take me next. thank you :) You walk through my mind
sending waves of thought and feeling
shooting through my body
you talk to my mind
showing me all the wonders of me
that I sometimes forget to see
you touch my body
with tender hands
and thrill it with waves of ecstasy
all of this, you do to me
with your mind, your energy and your voice
I wait and dream of our bodies
touching for the first time

each word of the poem ‘Greener Gardens’ painted such lovely images in my mind,
you took me for a wonderful walk and it pulled this out of my memory.
I can’t wait to see where your words take me next.
thank you :)

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